CORRECTIONS TO PROOFS by bob jantzen October 15, 2005
[your list below is not in chronological order??? so I mixed
up the corrections with the article section in my first version]
In response to email:
Subject: Re: translated Fermi papers for Fermi volume ready
From: E H Chionh
Date: Tue, 16 Aug 2005 14:18:00 +0800
Note: The WS Proceedings superscript Footnote style overlooks the fact
that most authors forget to put footnotes after punctuation where they belong
and to compensate the well know LaTeX style file overcite.sty should be
incorporated into the proceedings macros (it automatically switches the order
when punctuation is encountered after a footnote). This error occurs in some of the
articles below. Similarly the Proceedings title macro forces the text in footnotes
to the title to be all lowercase, removing necessary uppercase first letters.
This latter problem is the easiest to be fixed.
See corrections listed after each article title.
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1. On the Dynamics of a Rigid System of Electric Charges on
Translational Motion (7 pp.)
ftp://ftp.wspc.com.sg/incoming/canon/edit/fermi1_20050816110433.pdf
PP.2-3: the boldface letter "a" in Eq.(5), in L.2 after Eq.(5),
in Eq.(6) twice, and L.2 after Eq.(6)
should be a boldface math italic "$a$"
P.2, L. after Eq.(6): change "cartesian" to "Cartesian"
L.2 after Eq.(6): change "that" to "those"
2nd L. of text from bottom: change "orthogonal substitution" to "orthogonal transformation"
P.4, L.4: change "If the" to "In the"
P.5., L.3 from bottom: change "asumme" to "assume"
P.6., L.2 of text from bottom: change "being $m_{i0}$ " to "since $m_{i0}$ is"
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2. On the Electrostatics of a Homogeneous Gravitational Field and on the
Weight of Electromagnetic Masses (9 pp.)
ftp://ftp.wspc.com.sg/incoming/canon/edit/fermi2_20050816110517.pdf
P.4, L.1: change "the Poisson's law" to "Poisson's law"
L. after Eq.(10): change WIth" to "With"
Eq.(12)*: why is the equation not centered?
P.5, L. after Eq.(15): change "the Coulomb" to "Coulomb"
L.2 after Eq.(16): change "indicating by" to "indicating with"
P.7, Section 6, L.4: change "that is say" to "that is to say"
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3. On Phenomena Occurring Close to a World Line (7 pp.)
ftp://ftp.wspc.com.sg/incoming/canon/edit/fermi3_20050816110555.pdf
P.1: Footnote * at bottom of page: because of shortsided latex title macros, footnotes to the title
are automatically lowercase. restore the uppercase "Presented" "G. Armellini" "January"
L.13 of main text: change "will be still" to "will still be"
L.2 above Eq.(1): change "choosen" to "chosen"
P.2, L.2 after second unnumbered equation:
change "vector {\bf C}, the geodetic curvature"
to "geodesic curvature vector {\bf C}"
Section 2, L.1: change "Let us now assign at a point P$_0$ of L $n$" to
"At a point P$_0$ of L let us now assign $n$"
LL.2-3 from bottom: change
"with every point of L n mutually orthogonal directions" to
"n mutually orthogonal directions with every point of L"
P.3, L.5 above Eq.(4): change "greater" to "higher"
P.4, L.3: change "cartesian" to "Cartesian"
L.2 above last unnumbered equation on page: change "the phenomena" to "some phenomena"
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4. Correction of a Contradiction between Electrodynamic and Relativistic
Electromagnetic Mass Theories (8 pp.), one correction to be done on p. 5
ftp://ftp.wspc.com.sg/incoming/canon/edit/fermi4c_20050816110636.pdf
P.1: Footnote * at bottom of page: because of shortsided latex title macros, footnotes to the title
are automatically lowercase. restore the uppercase "On" "Rend. Acc. Lincei"
p.2, L.4: put footnote superscript "6" after the period.
P.4, L.4 from bottom: put footnote superscript after colon
P.5, L.2: change "worldlines" to "world lines"
Eq.(1): change comma to period at end of equation
P.6, 3rd text line from bottom: change "timeline" to "time line"
P.7, Eq.(3): insert period at end of equation
L.2 after Eq.(3): change "it's" to "it is"
L.2 above Eq.(4): put footnote superscript 9 after the comma
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5. Masses in the Theory of Relativity (2 pp.)
ftp://ftp.wspc.com.sg/incoming/canon/edit/fermi5_20050816110715.pdf
P.1, L.3 of the main text: change "given given" to "given"
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6. A Theorem of Calculation of Probability and Some of Its Applications
(16 pp.)
ftp://ftp.wspc.com.sg/incoming/canon/edit/fermi38b_20050816110815.pdf
P.1, L.2 of main text: change "addenda" to "terms"
L.3: move footnote supescript "2" after period
P.3, L. after second equation: change "put" to "set"
L. after Eq.(10): change "Let us change in it" to "In it let us change"
P.4, L. above Eq.(15): change "By giving to $t$" to "Replacing $t$ by"
Section 2, L.1: change "mantain" to "maintain"
L.2 above Eq.(16): insert space between "dx" and "(x> to italicized text
p.10, L. below Eq.(34): change "evidently" to "clearly"
P.12, L. above Eq.(40): remove space in front of first word "from"
P.13, L.2 after Eq.(43): chang e "in condition" to "in the ponsition"
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7. An Attempt at a Theory of /beta Rays (16 pp.), please check the
footnote on p. 1, should we change 'ZS. fur Phys.' to 'Z. fur Phys.'? YES
ftp://ftp.wspc.com.sg/incoming/canon/edit/fermi80a_20050816110939.pdf
P.2, L. above Eq.(1): change "substitutions" to "transformations"
P.3, L. above Eq.(2): change "put" to "set"
L. above Eq.(4): change "set:" to "set"
Section 3, L. 1: change "constituted by" to "composed of"
P.5, L.4 below Eq.(10): change "as" to "like"
2 lines above Eq.(11) change "substitution" to "transformation"
L. above Eq.(11): change "Lorenz" to "Lorentz"
PP.6-7, Eqs.(29),(33),(34),(35): put period at end of equation to end sentence
P.10, L. above Eq (36): change "as" to "like"
P.16: L.4 from end: change "carry us" to "take us"
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8. Lectures on Atomic Physics Third Lecture Theories on the Origins of
the Elements (17 pp.)
ftp://ftp.wspc.com.sg/incoming/canon/edit/fermi240-3_20050816111032.pdf
P.1,L.13 of paragraphed text: change "approachable by" to "accessible to"
P.2, L.4, beginning: change "analysis" to "analyses"
L.7: change "the 1 or 2%" to "1 or 2%"
L.11, end of line: change "deep"to "profound"
L.25: change "idfferent"to "different"
L.29: change "It's" to "It is"
L.31, end of line: change "of few" to "of a few"
L.32: change "greater difficulties" to "greatest difficulties"
L.34: change "has been even" to "has even been"
L.42 (last line): change "origin as" to "origin such as"
P.3, L.17: change "and the characteristics both chemical and physical"
to "and both chemical and physical characteristics"
L.22: move "also" to "have also been"
L.23: change "clouds of the" to "clouds of"
L.28: change "objects as" to "objects such as"
L.33: delete "(Table )"
P.4, L.2 of the text: change "After the" to "After"
L.16: change "a considerably" to "an extremely"
P.5, L.4, end of line: change "over it" to "above it"
P.6: L.9: change "from long" to "over some"
P.7: L.19, end of line: change "ging" to "going"
P.8, L.11: change "that what" to "that which"
L.15: change "how much" to "how strong"
L.16: delete "strong"
L.17: change "bottom" to "end"
P.9, L.12: change "wrong since" to "wrong like"
L.14: change "At any way" to "In any case"
P.13, Figure 1 caption. The caption should be empty, but the words "ATOMIC WEIGHT"
should be centered under the bottom axis of the graph labeling the horizontal axis
in a similar typeface to the words labeling the vertical axis
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9. Formation of Images with Rontgen Rays (4 pp.)
ftp://ftp.wspc.com.sg/incoming/canon/edit/fermi7_20050816110741.pdf
P.1, L.1 of main text: change "nor" to "or"
L.14: footnote superscript "2" should follow the period
Footnote 1: Remove << >> and italicize "C.R." (maybe it is Compt. Rend.?)
P.2, L.2 above Eq.(2): move "respectively" to follow "form" (readds smoother)
L.10 from bottom: change "with little" to "with a little"
P.3, L.3: change "fast on" to "tightly to"
L.9.: change "trying the mirrors by" to "testing the mirrors with"
L.10: change "of the ordinary" to "of ordinary"
P.4, Figure 2: remove space before comma
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10. A Statistical Method for the Determination of Some Properties of the
Atom (5 pp.)
ftp://ftp.wspc.com.sg/incoming/canon/edit/fermi43_20050816110905.pdf
P.1, L.1 of main text: change "show" to "present"
and change "results about" to "results on"
L.4: change "by" to "of"
footnote: change "ZS." to "Z."
P.2, L. after Eq.(4): change "additional" to "additive"
P.3, L.1: change "evidently" to "clearly"
L. after Eq.(8): change "evidently" to "clearly"
P.4 FIGURE 1: replace with new scanned graphic from original article,
your present version is a poor recreation by the translator
fermi43fig1.jpg or fermi43fig1.psd:
needs slight rotation and spot removal:
http://www34.homepage.villanova.edu/robert.jantzen/mg/fermi/fermi43fig1.jpg
http://www34.homepage.villanova.edu/robert.jantzen/mg/fermi/fermi43fig1.psd
P.5, 2nd L. from end: change "valuation" to "evaluation"
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